Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-25175520-20150307231018/@comment-92.32.117.167-20150428152558

Hello, I have been reading this RP for awhile now, and I was wondering if I could introduce my own character to this. Tell me what you think about it and I'll appreciate to get suggestions on changes. Read on and enjoy :)

Race: Cabal

Rank: Valus

Name: Ma'Carn

Gender: Male

Class: Colossus

Apperance: (since i don't know what kind of measurement system of lengths and heights you use, I'm going to use references from in-game to give a hint of how tall he is. He's basically just as tall as Valus Ta'aurc in the strike on Mars).

Weapons: (ok, this is where it's going to become a little bit controversial, as none of these armaments are used by Colossi in-game. Just say it if you think it's bad, and i'll change back to the normal weapons for the Colossus) All of Ma'Carn's weaponry are handmade for him, and are seen nowhere else in the Cabal army. Ranged: Twin Shoulder-mounted Cabal Gatling guns (i don't know what they are actually called, but you know what i mean, right?), Energy Shield, four times the size of a normal Phalanx Shield and a huge battlehammer (i really wanted to have a Cabal unit that's a bit melee oriented). And finaly, a jumppack.

Armor: Reinforced Colossus Armor to withstand missile blasts, coloured in gold with silver details and trim.

Shader: None

Jumpship: Huge Cabal Warship, three times the size of a Ketch, but due to this the ship cannot land on a planet/moon. Named Vita Extinctor IX

Bio: Valus Ma'Carn is a ruthless leader and an excellent tactician that is the current highest ranking Cabal commander in this solar system. Prior to Valus Ta'aurcs demise he was a Primus, and Ma'carn often took advice from him. However, they both fighted in different ways, in different wars. While Ta'aurc employed a highly defensive strategy against the Guardians on Mars, building strongholds and only engaging the Guardians if they attacked first, Ma'carn launched a violent offensive against the other species of The Darkness. Ma'carn utilized his superior strategies to outwit Fallen, Hive and Vex. All of these victories both made him the perfect choice to become the new Valus after Ta'aurcs death, and it also gave him a reputation amongst the other species. Now that he's a Valus in command of the Cabal warfleet, using the "Vita Extinctor IX" as his flagship, he personally gives direct orders to three different Cabal regiments: the Lava Maulers coloured in red and orange, who is making up the bulk of Ma'carns forces, the Storm Juggernauts coloured in black and light blue, serving as Ma'carns strike force/shock troops, and finaly, the Life Obliterators coloured in silver and dark green, being the special operations unit of Ma'carns army, and it's also the regiment he was commanding as a Primus prior to Valus Ta'aurcs death, after which Ma'carn was promoted to a Valus. He's nothing but a rumor amongst the Guardians, but he should definitely be taken seriously as a threat to the Light.

Other: has three bodyguards: Bracus Tha'larc of the Storm Juggernauts, Bracus Kha'marn of the Lava Maulers and the Psion Flayer Iokar of the Life Obliterators. And a personal unit of soliders trained to protect him, named The Honor Guard.

NOTE: I am not trying to take over the Cabal roleplaying from the other guy who roleplays them, i was rather thinking that these two Cabal armies could co-exist with each other. And I won't be trying to control the other character simply because my guy is the higher ranking officer. I will not be trying to interfere with someone's plans for the roleplay either.