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Thank you for posting your suggustions. I now believe that half of this could have been avoided by posting more information. So here are some elaborations on his abilites.

Dark bolt can be compared to a slightly more damaging but slightly slower firing void wizard darkness blast. I believe the "rends armour with ease" can be removed.

The "darkness wrapped void shield" is not a ward of dawn equivilant. It is just a standard void shield, like those of minotaurs or psions. If you still want it removed, that may be possible.

Harness will renders his body immobile, and open to attack while in effect, and is mainly used to control cultists and the like, with controlling guardians being a difficult and last ditch resort. It also may only be cast on one target at a time.

Break will is meant to temporarily render a guardian heavily impaired, and encourage teamwork to prevent the death of the broken one. NOTE: it is not a one-shot, as it requires something else to actually kill the target. It also wears off after a short time and is rather difficult to cast. It also may only be cast on one target at a time, and may not be used at the same time as harness will.

Rift tear is used for travel and occasional repositioning during combat. It has limited range and cant really be spammed.

As for the cultists, most of them are cannon fodder. Able to fight intellegently, and use tactics, but, armoured in scavenged light armour and tattered robes, they go down about as easily as the average vandal/acolyte/psion/goblin. A few of the vetrans are tougher and more experienced, being more dangerous, skilled, and fanatical, but none of them could hope for and even one-on-one fight with a guardian. They rely on numbers and weapon specialists (snipers, machine gunners, and rocketeers) to kill you.

I hope this solves/clears up some things. If there are any changes you still want, please post them. And if there is anything I have not gone over that you want adressed, please post that too.

Oh, and for those of you wondering what gives me the athority to say or know any of this, 75 approached me with the base idea for this character, and we both kind of built on it from there. He still has the final say between the two fo us on which tweaks he wants to accept, but he has made it preety clear that he is open to all suggustions.)