Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-26759719-20151124165839/@comment-26809040-20151124215943

Perhaps an explanation as to why you recived this seal:

1) While the basic premise of the RP is ok, it could use some work, like making the overall goal to, say: destroy the devouring mind and stop it from turning its attentions to earth.

2) It has already been established in the lore that a nexus buried deep within a planet, controlled by a nexus mind, is responsible for terraforming a planet to suit the vex's needs, rather than a "breeder".

3) The vex were mostly contained to Mercury by the traveller at the end of the collapse. Thusly, you'd need a justifiable reason as to why the vex have turned their attention eleswhere.

4) The exo stranger only shows up breifly, and rarely talks, so I dont see how she'd be a rep in the tower.

5) While the enemies are interesting, they also need some work:

Sol breeders are fine I suppose.

Sub-atomic vex have existed in the lore for quite a while, and I dont see how they would deal arc damage, or even be combatable by normal means.

Annihalators dont really need rocket pods, and should be named after a monster from mythology: cenataurs, perhaps?