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(ok, here's the improved profile for PRIMUS Ma'carn)

Race: Cabal

Name: Ma'carn

Rank: Primus

Class: Colossus

Apperance: "Normal" size for a Primus

Wargear: Heavy slug thrower, backpack missile launcher and a jumppack (this is basically normal wargear for a Colossi). Normal Cabal armor in the colours of the Storm Juggernauts, black and dark blue.

Jumpship: the Vita Extinctor IX, his flagship, which is about as big as a Ketch

Bio: Primus Ma'carn is an excellent tactician in command of the Cabal regiment Storm Juggernauts. While still a Bracus, Ma'carn got teached in war strategy by the legendary fleet commander Valus Ta'aurc. After his training with the Valus, he set out on a crusade against the rival species of The Darkness, utilizing strategies that he had learned from the Valus, and tactics of his own, to outsmart Fallen, Hive and Vex. In the end, the other species was pushed away from Mars, with only the Vex remaining as thorn in the Cabals side. This victory earned him the rank of a Primus, and full control over his regiment: the Storm Juggernauts. However, while renowned as a hero amongst the Cabal, and feared as a destroyer among the other species of the Darkness, he is still nothing but a rumor for the Guardians. That is however, soon to change as he has decided to avenge his former master and mentor Valus Ta'aurc, and hunt down the Guardians who killed him, with his search for revenge beginning at the icy moon Europa.

Other: has one bodyguard: his right-hand man and second-in-command, Bracus Tha'larc of the Storm Juggernauts.

(alright then, I think I have tweaked all of the requested things, and my account is coming up. Other than that, if you want me to roleplay as a minor antagonist, I could simply play as one of Ma'carns lieutenants, using the character chart where Ma'carn is a Valus and "saving" Ma'carn for a later RP. I would actually be fine with that.)