Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-68.113.45.96-20160709063604/@comment-26355186-20160710001738

You... you can't be serious. You cannot be. You aren't, right? Are you seriously trying to promote this as your own original idea? This is a piss-poor ripoff of the House of Storms RP and the A Dying Flame RP.

To begin with, the name of the House is a ripoff from the Golden Age facility from House of Storms, called the Icicle Towers, known as the Frozen Spears or the Ice Spears to the titular Fallen House.

Your character is an Archon who is extremely devoted to the Prime of the House, bordering on zealotry. Along with him having reprogrammed Vex under his control, Raxis looks like a very close copy of Rhall, the antagonist of HoS.

The House's ethics, policies and history are a mash up of those of the Storms and the House of Flames. They're friendly to the City and the Reef yet only openly support them if it suits them, that's the Flames. They're a very old House hailing from the Whirlwind, Flames. Assassinations are the most common way to advance in rank, and is a behavior supported by the Kell, that's the Storms. They're incredibly secretive, Storms. They follow the House of Rain's prophecies very closely, Storms.

That's some of the stuff you copied. Now, I'd just like to point some other stuff out, which you didn't copy, but it's so mind-shatteringly lore-breaking that I cannot avoid it.

An alliance with the New Monarchy? That is so ridiculous I'm not even going to say anything else than that. It's ridiculous.

A lair just outside the City walls? Do you believe that a whole Titan order and the FOTC would miss a Fallen Lair just outside their patrolling routes?

So that's that. You're a copycat, and there really is no denying it.