Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-25728469-20150523185110/@comment-26355186-20150607175632

ReleaseTheKraken wrote: The Skolas here is pre-capture.

Skolas hefted his Scorch Cannon over his as he surveyed Grayor and Besis lead a squad of Wolves down to the Vaults to look for the relics while the Cabal and Vex forces were preoccupied.

"My Kell" said a voice behind him. Skolas turned around. It was a Dreg, commonly known as Peksis, The Disavowed. His arms were docked at the Eos Clash.

"What is it, Peksis?" Skolas inquired.

"T-there is a C-c-cabal force coming up behi-nd ussssss" he hissed and spat.

Sure enough, Skolas heard a BOOM as one of the walls combusted. He turned around to see a Centurion decked in red.

"Ah... So you must be the one called Skolas" he said.

"Yes. I am Skolas, Kell of Kells!" yelled Skolas "Whta do you want from me?" he hissed.

"I heard of your attempts to infuse Fallen weaponry with Vex technology" the Ceturion said. "Don't you want revenge for your failure?"

Skolas thought for a second "That is true" he said.

"Why don't we set aside out differences, hm? Join together as one armada?"

"Yes. I suppose so." said Skolas. "You, my friend, now march with Wolves.

"Excellent" he thought (Wow! Just, wow. Do you, ReleaseTheKraken, know how much this will disrupt the RP? Let me point out everything wrong with this.

1: Peekis is not the wimp you depict him as. There is a reason that there is still some Wolves that follow him, even though his lower arms are docked.

2: Grayor is an assassin, not a squad leader.

3: Do you realize how unbalanced this will become if Skolas is in the RP? He will completly remove Besis as the leader of the Wolves, and will take over as the main antagonist of the entire RP. This leads to problem number four.

4: Why on Earth is the most wanted fugitive in the solar system at Titan? Shouldn't Skolas be persuading/forcing the other Houses to join him? What is it that make it so that he needs to be on Titan to supervise the Wolves hunting for the relics?

5: How can there be walls where Skolas is? You just stated that he sent down a group into the Vaults, which means that he is on the surface.

6: Bracus Vor'umic is a Colossus, not a Centurion.

7: Vor'umic should be gunned down as soon as the Fallen see him. I don't think the Wolves would be that casual about a Cabal leader barging inside their base.

8: There is absoletely no reason for the Fallen and Cabal to ally, and the reason you gave is very lazy. Do you seriously think the Wolves would ally with the Cabal because of some failed experiment that the Cabal leader just mentions?

9: How and why do you think you can get away with changing the timeline where this plays out? Nova stated that this RP is set after the events of HoW, and then you don't care about that and change it to during HoW.

Conclusion: You give yourself a way too big playfield. Yes, I know that the point of roleplaying is to use your imagination and create your own stories inside, for example: the Destiny universe. This sounds similar to the genre fanfiction. However, the main difference between a roleplay and fanfiction, is that there is boundaries in a roleplay. Boundaries that exist to make sure nothing lorebreaking and outrageous happen, and to make sure the things that happen follows the lore, or does not break the lore too much. You sir, just broke those boundaries. I am honestly surprised that Nova have not corrected/stopped/put a leash on you yet. You seriously need to think before you post. Think if the stuff you are going to post is ok, if it stays inside the boundaries etc. To conclude, I think this whole Skolas thing should be retconned.

Sincerely, Inquisitor01