Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-25926749-20150730153357/@comment-25926749-20150918203555

I hear good points, and I a appreciate the mostly positive criticism. I'll fix some of the items, but let me address all these problems: Thanks for the criticism! I'll use it to make the mission better. More stuff coming tonight, possibly some dialogue for the characters.
 * Yes, I meant Cayde was the one you give the knife to. It was gonna go to Shaax, but I changed it to make more sense, as Cayde would most likely reward you for finding the Frontier.
 * What you said was kinda what I wanted Lauren to be, Acolyte. I just wanted her to sell unique weapons. Y'know, Flamethrowers, Sidearms, Grenade Launchers, Arm Cannons..Untypical weapons in the City's arsenal.
 * European Dead Zone. Got it.
 * What I thought they would be are a band of nomads who want to study Hive and other enemies of Darkness, but also, they study the Traveler's Guardians and Ghosts. Sort of a Warlock order, but not with Guardians.
 * Your mission does sound better....I'll get on it.
 * Sorry, I forgot, Inquisitor. I thought you said they were an army of Guardians. My memory is fuzzy.
 * Okay then. I was thinking 4-6 Exotic Jumpships and 3-4 Exotic Sparrows.
 * So, the Burning Legion could still be of high honor to the Cabal. I should be able to polish the mission.