Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-24510587-20160105194819/@comment-26759719-20160108194418

ReDquinox wrote:

Lengendary7 wrote: Kelliks, flame captain

Species: fallen

Affiliation : house of flame

Rank: captain

Equipment: shrapnel launcher ,twin swords

Bio: kelliks being one of the most highest ranking captains within the house of flames  known for brutality and showing no mercy for the weak. He was once a dreg and then moved up to a vandal and then a captain but was humiliated by the barons and archons of house of flames,from a captain to a dreg and vowed  he would get his position back, make it so the house of flames would beg for mercy at his feet by becoming the best , but he was never the best. He got the honour of being titled flame captain. But still he vowed for every member of the house of flames to die in the most unimaginable way possible

Notes ( kelliks has 3 arm his lower right arm was blown in battle )

Kelliks cloak has rip marks in the middle to signify how he would break the house of flames (I have a couple of issues with your character.

First off: why would any of the Barons decide to give him the rank of Captain when he vowed to make the Flames suffer?

Next: why does he simultaneously want to regain his rank within the Flames and destroy the Flames?

And finally: how would he ever destroy the entire House of Flames on his own ? 1 he vowed it to himself, none of the members of house of flames know that he wants to destroy house of Flames they just think that he has learnt his lesson and ready to make amends.

But some do suspect him

2 he lost his rank once and made it back upto flame captain, basically he is trying to get to the highest rank possible (currently captain) and make it so that the house of Flames depends on him so much that even the Kell of flames would beg to him

He hasn't done anything he is waiting for the right opportunity

(Also what rank is a aka, devil captain , Wolve captain . Are they above captain and below baron?

3 he hasn't