Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-25926749-20150730153357/@comment-25926749-20150912140011

Inquisitor01 wrote: I am back. I have read your idea MiB, and I have feedback for you.

1: These new skeleton enemies seems somewhat unlikely. However, I have a better idea, which also connects with Mecher Orbiks-6's lore. The Disciples of Mecher is a group of Vex. Basically, my lore idea would be that sometime during The Reef Wars, Irxis(one of Skolas' enemies and claimants of the Kellship over the Wolves), desparate to gain an advantage over Skolas and Parixas(another claimant of the Kellship), sent two of her most loyal vassals, Vektis and Orbiks-6, to claim Vex technology for use against her enemies. However, the expedition to Venus was a failure, and all of the Wolves involved was either killed or captured by the Vex. Orbiks and Vektis was taken inside the Citadel, where they were put through unimaginable horrors and pains. Eventually, one of the Axis Minds took interest in the resistance put up from Mecher Orbiks. This Mind began to apply Vex tech on Orbiks-6. This Mind did however do a fatal mistake, which was that it applied a Vex programming in the circuits of Orbiks-6. After some time, Orbiks learned to use his modifications to his own advantage, and soon learned to override the program the Mind had applied. Orbiks managed to take control over a few of his captors, and eventually staged a revolt, destroying the Mind that had held Orbiks and Vektis captives. Because of the torture the Wolves had been put through, only Vektis and Orbiks remained alive. However, Orbiks loyalities was still with Irxis. Once Orbiks managed to re-obtain their Wolf Skiff, the duo set out towards the Reef, eager to help Irxis turn the tide of the war. But once they reached the Reef, they were greeted with the grim news that Irxis had been killed by Skolas' armies. Dissapointed, Vektis and Orbiks started to drift around in the Reef aimlessly, raiding anything they came across, even fellow Wolves. Eventually, Orbiks began to understand the powers it had obtained, and realised its potential, and that it should not be serving under Vektis, as the Archon was in Orbiks way of seeing it, inferior to the Servitors. So, one fateful night in their Skiff, Orbiks inserted a small Vex mind core, taken from a Goblin, into Vektis' helmet. As Orbiks had the powers of an Axis Mind, Vektis was forced to follow Orbiks' every single order. Vektis himself is fully aware of this, but can simply stare and silently rage at Orbiks' betrayal as his body complies to the Vex programs. As time passed, Orbiks began to rule over more Fallen and Vex, calling them its Disciples. It became a tyrant, inserting control over a small portion of Venus, naming it the Empire of Mecher. The news of the Dark Servitor soon reached The Last City, which sent out an elite Fireteam, led by the Hunter now only known as The Frontier Master. The strike was a success, and Vektis, Orbiks, and a few Wolves were re-captured, and sent to the Reef. However, the powers of Orbiks could not be held in by the Prison of Elders. Orbiks and Vektis fled the Reef again, now seeking revenge on The Frontier Master. But the Hunter was prepared, and he faced the Nightmare Servitor in an ancient airbase, which would later serve as the Frontier base. The Nightmare Servitor was cast away into the catacombs deep beneath the base, forever trapped with Vektis.

(Sh*t, I didn't mean to write that much :P) PERFECT! Thank you so much. This is a great idea..Anything else I need to change? After all, I'm probably gonna change Shaksis (Acolyte...I liked the name.) will probably be scrapped: I'll have new character sell the new Exotic jumpships and such. Speaking of which, about the rotating vendors...I think I didn't speak about them enough. So basically, like Xûr, these vendors rotate every weekly reset, 2 at a time. The ones being rotated: Planning 2 more. Shaksis is scrapped because I'm pretty sure the Frontier wouldn't leave any of it's disciples alive, or at least alive and roaming.
 * Exser, Frontier Rogue
 * Noir-734X
 * Keeper Satoro
 * The Isolated Mind

Nice to see you still active, Inquisitor. :)