Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-26388714-20151105143114/@comment-26355186-20151122105721

ManinBlack007JK wrote: Okay, this is constructive.

1. The whole "Our eye demands.." thing? Well, it was just something I came up with as a neat little start to PoK missions. If it's annoying, I'll remove it.

2. Well, it's a Prison of Elders type-thing, so I really didn't know what to call it. I'll come up with something, though.

3. You're definetly right here. I was just out of ideas..Perhaps I could incorporate some Servitor tactics into some Vex strategies, sort of a mish-mash of the two. M.06 was modified by Vex, after all.

4. Alright, that makes sense...In Destiny, at least.

5. I really didn't elaborate on this, sorry for that. Here's the explanation.

3 Guardians are sent. The destroyed Tower is just shambles, like a long vertical line of pieces of the tower. If one dies from the supernova, it moves faster, eventually swallowing the other 2. That's why the Guardians outside have to kill the Dregs around the map quickly.

6. Adds will spawn later, I just want the boss fight to revolve around a sole battle between the Fireteam and MO6. Make it personal, Y'know.

On a side note, Dreamweaver doesn't necessarily have all the gusto and puzzles I wanted it to have. I'll rewrite it.

7. I would think that the Shriekers would spawn as soon as you walk into the room, that's how you'd know. But, I want this to be original, so it'll probably be changed soon.

8. Perhaps something sent them up? I took a leap of faith with that.

9. Well, yes, but within the Prison of Kings, the Scarlet Brood's wizards were limited. So, according to lore I created, the Wizards gave powers to a Cursed Thrall, Slitrot, and gave him the ability to curse other prisoners, leading to their immolation, thus giving them blood to feast on.

10. The ability happens more than once, for clearing up.

11. If Slitrot attacks you, you become cursed. From there, you must avoid the killer Thrall and touch Slitrot to curse him. Think of it as dunking a Tomb Husk on him...Though, perhaps, a period where he is vulnerable to the cursing might make the fight much easier?

12. Okay then. So it shall be.

I'll rewrite both of these with this info in mind. Thanks so much for the critique. Planning a Vex and Cabal PoK mission. The Vex boss is the Consecutive Mind, who I am currently writing lore for. 1: I actually meant the "The Eye oversees all..." part, but I realise now that it is supposed to be the description for PoK. Right?

8: I did actually mean that the Shriekers wouldn't be able to follow Slitrot, not being able to appear in the arena. Shriekers are normally summoned by Wizards though.

9: Woah. Noice lore. You don't you post the lore here, instead of holding onto it until someone asks about it?

11: I believe that a period of vulnerability is the best option.