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Having his men helping most of the injured Frost Hammers, Primus Ma'carn was inspecting the Artillery Pits together with his chief mechanic and construction master Psion Operant Iokar. (Im just going to give the guy a name so I don't have to call him Psion Operant all the time, he's going to appear lot's more in the RP)

"How much damage did the Fallen do to the Firebase Iokar?" Ma'carn already knew the answer to that question, but he still asked, as if to get some sort of confirmation on it.

"It appears the damage done is irreparable, unless the Frost Hammers have spare artillery pieces. And how can you be sure that it was the Fallen who did this?", Iokar replied.

"It has to be them, I am certain of it! No other weapon than a shock blade can cause that sort of injury on our armor." Iokar didn't reply to this. Instead, he ran off seemingly having discovered something important. Ma'carn followed, and saw what the Psion had seen. The headless body of a Centurion was laying in the snow a few metres away, with a Projection Rifle in his hand.

"He died as a warrior should: fighting, and never letting go of his weapon.", Ma'carn commented.

"It appears his death might not have been in vain", Iokar replied to Ma'carn. "Come and look here."

Leaning against the wall of the trench were the burning wreck of a Pike, with the deceased rider's charred remains being slumped on the ground a further bit away. Iokar tore a piece of fabric from the wreck.

"What does this look like to you, Primus?" "It looks like a banner of a Fallen house. So it was the Fallen, as I presumed." "Too bad we can't read which house it belongs to." "Yes, but at least we have proof now. The Fallen IS here on this forsaken lump of ice", Ma'carn said.

"Let's show it to the Frost Hammer Primus. Let him know what we are up against."

(is this structure better, or should i use my old structure to my posts?)