Thread:NegativeZero.0/@comment-26103825-20151007231738/@comment-26809040-20151008025837

Derp 2000

While I accept your apology, Do know that ReD is my fellow RPer, and friend. Also, the comment you directed at him seemed like a blanket statement directed at all who dwell here, hence my response.

For refrence, ReD dislikes inexperinced players due to their tendancy to mess up. He's also more irrateable lately due to the actions of a contributor known as Sauron190, whose actions universally pissed off everyone in our RP group for months until we kicked him out.

Oh, and what you said about disliking people who correct or pick apart your posts? Part of being a roleplayer, especially a new one, is reciving constructive criticism on your posts and style, which help you improve your roleplaying.

For example, the creation of the exos is shrouded in mystery and lost to time. Thusly, writing about the ongoings of an operatoinal exo construction and training faciility at an unknown time renders the mystery a moot point. Also, exos are likely so advanced that they are either extremely resistant, or entirely immune to viruses or tampering. Oh, and "Antibiotics", by defenition, may only be used against bacterira, not computer viruses, along with "vaccines" and "cures". Also, the plural for "cabal" (singular) is also "cabal" (plural) not "cabals". And lastly, and perhaps most importantly, dont just transcribe your actions from the game into the actions of your character. To make your character feel organic, they must be written as a part of the world, not just the vessel of your deeds when you play the game. If anything, I reccomend creating a character that isnt a copy of your in-game character. Instead try creating and playing someone entirely diffrent, who is defined by the traits and deeds you make up for them, not the constraints of the game.

In summery, thank you for apoligizing, and please take this advice as constructive criticism to improve upon your roleplaying.

-NegativeZero