Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-26388714-20150820011435/@comment-26664320-20151008230424

Derp2000 wrote: (This is my version of my Intro, I see that Risk already made one, if you guys are sticking with it, I can remove mine)

Location: Black Shield, Firebase Thuria

Fireteam: Artemis Nitran, Verres-7, Cassandra, Rize-21

Ghost: "This is how far I can bring you to your mission Guardians"

The crisp air, reddish brown sand, Cabal & Guardians lie dead, & the many bases leading to other bases, this was part of the wars that took place at Mars, Earth, & all the other maps that were run over by Cabals.

''  "This really feels like home, all the Guardians that I faced at the Crucible was just amazing, it all..." Rize was interrupted by Artemis "Guardians, stay focused, there could be other Cabal lurking around this place, after all, this was a war zone."''

The Fireteam agrees.

'' The team was searching for what happened to this war zone. All they could see was the Cabal on top of each other & Guardians that they would easily recognize. As they were searching for clues, Verres stumbled upon what appears to be a dead Cabal, thus hitting a wall.''

''"What the heck was that." Verres said, confusingly. He was waving his arm, signing that he needs to see this.''

''"I see, it's a invisible gate, Cabals would use this to sneak through past Guardians, so they could launch a suprise attack. It worked, but not for long." Cassandra told the Fireteam. "The Fallen would use a similar gate, but to keep out Guardians that are trying to get to them."''

''"DON'T try to do anything that could set an alarm, this is still equiped with..." Artemis was telling, but the Cabal Alarm went off.''

[Static] BEEP.....BEEP.....BEEP....BEEP....BEEP....BEEP....BEEP....BEEP....BEEP

''"Who freaking set off the Alarm?!" Rize said, furiously''

The Fireteam panicked frantically, trying to turn off the alarm.

''"GOT IT!" Verres said, just turning off the alarm.''

''"Phew that was close, we could..." As they all turned around, they were surrounded by Cabal and the Harvesters.''

"Well, this is gonna be fun"

(That is my intro, if you guys don't like it, I'll delete it) (No offense but we kind of have thing against controllnig other people's characters. Secondly, why is everything in italics? Thirdly, in your bio you stated that all goblins are descendants from so called "exo-bots"; we also have a thing against making random shit up. )