Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-25926749-20150730153357/@comment-26938201-20151001115127

ManinBlack007JK wrote: ''The Guardian goes through ruins of Deimos, jumping from destroyed chunk to chunk. They arrive at a large Scar Ketch, that has suffered major damage from the blast and has Cabal banners hanging off it.'' Ghost: This is a Fallen Ketch....Yet Cabal control it? I guess it's safe to say the Cabal blew up this place, like so many other worlds before...We need to delve deeper.

''The Guardian enters the Ketch, encountering dead or dying Fallen within derelict Pikes and Skiffs. As they walk, a Servitor being modified by Siege Engineers is seen: The Guardian has a brief firefight with them before killing them.''

Ghost: Let me near that Servitor: I can access what the Cabal have been putting inside it.

''The Ghost analyzes the Servitor, leading to massive shootouts with the new FoG enemies, led by a Forge Watcher, Bracus Tor'mak. Once all the Cabal are dead, Hierus Reu'ulan will appear at the end of a shielded doorway.''

Ghost: Their leader, Reu'ulan!

Reu'ulan: Your Tower will fall to us! The City will burn, and all that will be left is the ashes of Earth!

'''A final wave of attacking Centurions & Colussi go after the Guardian, resulting in their quick immolation. The mission ends.''

Cayde-6: Guardian. Cabal are galvanized by hatred and a high sense of pride, and no other force can match the fierceness of the Burning Legion. They have big plans for our death, and we are alone in this fight. War is imminent: Come back to the Tower to give us the info.

So, is bad, but I'll post the revised mission later. So, for now, here's what the story is planned for the Cabal:

So, to combat the City and to take the Traveler, Cabal leaders came together to form the Burning Legion, a group of high-ranking Cabal veterans whole sole purpose is to hunt down the Guardians and their Light. During this, several rogue Cabal Siege Engineers aligned with the BL stole a superweapon for use to destroy Earth once the Traveler was secured. Wanting to make sure the weapon worked, the four Hieri leading chose Deimos as a target for the test of the weapon. Thus, the explosion.

A Fallen House was stationed on Deimos: The House of Scars. Secluded from other houses, they most focused on hunting down the rest of the Wolved from the Reef Wars. But when the weapon destroyed Deimos, many of the Scar members perished, only a few important leaders and veterans being able to make it to their Skiffs in time. Wandering, the House eventually ended up on Earth, where they found the Frontier Master and their Kell, Voriks, made an uneasy deal with them to hunt down the Burning Legion for revenge.

After this, the BL had set up base on Phobos and Mars, but there was trouble between the four Hieri leading the Legion. Hierus Reu'ulan, O'rath, Va'akirn, and Tr'egum all disagreed on battle tactics to take the City. Inspired by the idea of the City's downfall, he murdered Va'akirn and Tr'egum, while O'rath fought him off and escaped in a Cabal Harvester with a small band of forces. The House of Scars and Frontier Master saw opprutinity and captured the Cabal, instating them into the Frontier when they explained they were against O'rath too.

Reu'ulan, now in full control, had an idea previously failed by Cabal leaders: A raid on the Prison of Elders. With newly appointed Forge Masters, he successfully took some Cells from the Prison of Elders: Mostly Broken Legion members that could become new leaders. One such leader, Primus Sho'kuan, took control of the other PoE cell members, instating a small faction of Fallen forced to fight under him, named the House of Flames. In a Strike against Sho'kuan, he was killed along with most of the House of Flames and other PoE members taken by BL troops.

Realizing his plan to gain more troops to take over the City didn't work, Reu'ulan turned to focus on arming his troops better: Thus, he hired a Flame Archon still alive from the last battle, Salius, to steal multiple Golden Age tech caches and make weapons from them. This was achieved, but the House of Flames turned on itself and started firing each other. Salius gave Guardians targeting him the weapons before being destroyed by a Cabal Forge Master, Valus Er'omas, of who the Guardians killed.

Reu'ulan was enraged, so he led a straight up attack on the City in a huge, Dreadnaught-like ship that had the superweapon armed and ready for fire: Guardians intervened, however, and stalled the ship's engines before it could make a move. Reu'ulan, now realizing he can't take the Traveler, was furious, so he met the Guardians head-on in a battle: he was killed, and the superweapon was destroyed, the ship now just floating in the remains of Deimos.

Finally, the new shaders. Finally, something easy. Probably a few I missed, I'm tired. Great work on the story! Would it be possible to create a new destination for guardians to go to such as the ship carrying the superweapon or the ruins of Deimos. A destination means that the players can really get into the story by being able to go to where it actually took place, rather than just viewing cinematics.
 * Esscene of Shadow-A black and grey shader, with shadows eminsting off your character.
 * Other Stars-A yellow and white shader, with shining light eminating off your armor.
 * Flames of War-A red and orange shader, with fire coming from your fists and head.