Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-26388714-20151017180041/@comment-26664320-20151110023330

Derp2000 wrote: (Sorry for being MIA for so long, computer and other things happened, lets get to it)

After Rize was done crawling, all he heard was bullets flying, feet stomping, and hammers flying through the air.

"Umm... Why is there a Valus?" Rize asked



"Well, lets get right to it."

As Rize was pulling out his Hand Cannon, when all of the sudden, a Harevster started dropping more Cabal.



"They're still not easy to kill."

One by one Rize quickly aimed his Eaysluna at the Legionaries' head. The bullets made a swift, yet a piercing sound. One by one, Almost Every bullet that Rize shot was a headshot, and one by one, Legionaries would fall to the hands of Rize and his Eaysluna. Yet he didn't realize, he would take more and more damage. Rize quickly hid behind a cover, trying to regain his health back



"Not right now, I can't be wasting my super like that."

Rize quickly peeked in and out of the cover, trying to shoot the Legionaries to get to Valus. The Legionaries were creeping closer and closer to Rize. Rize was giving all he has, throwing his Grenades, firing quickly, this time though, he was trying to kill the Cabal, whether it's a headshot or not. After a couple minutes, the battle was over between him and the Legionaries.

"sigh.. sigh... sigh... Well, that wasn't easy." Rize was out of breath after moving in and out of covers.

 The Ghost exclaimed. (This post is a major inprovement on your past posts, however you yet again placed in-game mechanics into the story.)