Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-25932172-20170421232928/@comment-26355186-20170607142449

(Adding on Dab's textwall above, here's the issue(s) with the more recent things you did, Bass. First of all, you never told us that you were writing Xor out of the story. Doing that would've helped significantly. Instead, we ended up with, well, all this. Seriously, tell us about that kind of stuff.

Secondly, the way you tried to execute the thing had a noticable touch of godmodding to it. Most RPers, not just us, take it as a rule to always allow the opposing part in a combat sequence to react. You didn't, instead allowing Xor to pull off a fairly ridiculous move that should logically have been stopped, as he was surrounded by several Guardians, two of which were within arms reach of him, and the only actual obstacle was the smoke screen. I'll admit that this is partially our fault, as we thought having the rules written down in the thread was unnecessary.

Thirdly, many of Xor's abilities seem very, very overpowered, while also very convenient for whatever obstacle he's up against. Need to get out of a location fast? He's got Golden Age modifications that give him superspeed. Need to sneak into a place unnoticed? Xor's stealth device is completely flawless and you can't see him. Then there's his backstory, which also, on occasion, goes similarly. There were few signs that Xor actually was centuries old until he blatantly told everyone that he was. There's a fine line between an interesting character and a Mary Sue, and occassionally, you cross that line. Call us paranoid from Sauron's antics, but we try our best to avoid this sort of stuff.

Finally, I'll also go ahead and say that we have not been treating you fairly at all. Many of the mistakes you made were caused by our lack of information regarding rules and general RP etiquette, contrary to what Red is saying.)