Board Thread:Fun and Games Forum/@comment-25175520-20150307231018/@comment-107.196.174.179-20150428203226

(92: While I am intriuged that yet another would like to play as an antagonist, there a few things with your character that I believe must be tweaked/fixed. First of all, while I love the elaboration, and the lore integration, the character and his forces seem a tad OP, intentional or not. Not only is a valus a pain in the ass to kill, but from his wargear, it looks like Ma'Carn would pulp the group in seconds. On top of that, a valus is the direct superior to a primus, so you would kinda be giving orders to 75. An easy way to fix this, is to rewrite him as a primus, and alter his wargear. That way he could sucessfully coexist with 75s character, and not be a unkillable tank. For wargear, you could try a projection rifle, a heavy slug thrower (gatling gun), or mabey a warhammer. And one last thing; while the cabal are known for being big, a ketch is the home to many, many fallen. So you might wanna downsize the ship a bit.)