Board Thread:Destiny Forum/@comment-26388714-20151110223912/@comment-71.89.251.205-20160714025026

im giving pointers as his writing style and demeanor include thoughtful and mature and respectable words showcasing his vocabulary and ability to express his message. So these are small things that can elevate his writing skills. That's why I chose to "correct" him. And as far as his grammar goes, although you don't think there is much wrong with it, I found several small discrepancies that I chose to point out. Thanks for your comment.